The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more recourses in its young people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
It is undeniable fact that in order to make a better future, it is appropriate way for country to invest on new resources in its young people. I partially concur with this statement and my personal views of this matter.
To embark upon, the evidences are plenty to prove why allocating on more resources in new generation are important for the country. The mammoth recognisable fact is that if youth attain good education, it will assist them to become a good citizens as well as they could be able to become more competitive as competition is burgeoning relentless. By such methods, which help the nation to decline unemployment rate and crime rate in the society. Young masses are future of country. In addition, contributing in the field of sports is much worthwhile because there are many young people who have desired to become a good player such as when players won gold medals for their country, both players and country where they belong, are appreciated by all over the world. Therefore, due to such factors have proved that it is best way for a country to prepare for the future.
However, there are some other key fields on which need to pay more attention by government. Firstly, in the term of overseas tourism. Since strengthen of economic is beneficial, it assists the government to sustain pressure into formidable situations. Government should spend money on a variety of areas ranging from historical and heritage places by which a ton of international tourists could be attracted towards such places as tourist spend a lot of money on different areas such as hotels and transport modes. Spending money by tourists, which help to enhance economic growth. To illustrate, sanik school, which is located in the kapurthala city where many tourist visit to see the beauty of this place.
To contemplate, albeit allocating on different resources is important for the country, there are some other fields which plays a vital role in this case and such factors could not be ignored by nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...n, it will assist them to become a good citizens as well as they could be able to become...
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Line 5, column 817, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...due to such factors have proved that it is best way for a country to prepare for the fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9616519174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028866381 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1406559689 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2074256901 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704418734393 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948741084666 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130156316239 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10505751691 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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