Dear Santa,
Have are things with you? It’s been a long time since we kept in touch by phone. I am writing to let you know that I have begun to work in a company called Honda in the Production department.
Let me put a finer point on why I changed my job. As I mentioned to you before I was unpleasant with what I was working on, it was dull, as well as I was unhappy because of mobbing that is implemented by managers, unfortunately. The new job that I’ve been working on since I left my previous job is such a wonderful job with many aspects of view, what I am most delighted with is having a flexible working hour, as well as working home office. I am granted as a Product Developer, since all my projects related to the mechanical design on the automation sector. The only drawback of the job is, they pay less than another job. If I compared the convenience of both new ones far more outweigh the one left.
These are not the only news from me. Next month I will have an annual vacation I can either visit you 15 days or 7 days in London, if you are available, of course. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Take care of yourself. Keep in touch
Best Regards
Erman DURAN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...job is, they pay less than another job. If I compared the convenience of both new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, well, of course, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24890829694 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48218610877 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5384553979 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151367923717 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452127044999 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403129547188 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998542931291 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143732779357 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.