There is an increasing number of people are concerned about whether to purchase a car, a television and a fridge is a better option. This essay will argue that the drawbacks of this outweigh the advantageous impacts. This essay will first discuss that buying these things leading to higher payment of extra cost and that it results in the environmental issues, followed by an analysis of how the prime advantage such as daily entertainment.
A higher payment bill could be witnessed as purchasing a car, a television and a fridge to one’s home. An extra cost of fulfilling fuel and parking enables to be anticipated when using car as a primary transported vehicle. Meanwhile, the electric energy consumed by television and fridge resulting in higher electricity payment bill. A report recently carried out by the British government demonstrates that homes with television and fridge pays three times higher of their total electric bills than who does not. Additionally, in terms of environmental problems, these electrical and fuel-filled products are the major factors influencing the depression of the biodiversity. The inner engines of automobiles emitting numerous gaseous pollutants to the environment destroys the ozone layer leading to the higher absorption of radiation from outer space. A recent study conducted by World Health Organization illustrated that the pollution level of Ho Chi Minh city is the second highest after Beijing of China with the amount of detrimental gases like nitrous oxide and carbon dioxide emitted to the air reached 2.5 ppm in 2018.
Those opposed to this advocate that there are huge benefits that people could obtain from buying these things to relax after working diligently at office. For example, traveling by car with their families at weekend, reserving food in the fridge, or simply enjoying the peaceful moment as watching television and forget about their tiredness and fatigue.
On balance, the fact that purchasing car, television and fridge contributing to a higher payment of fuel-filled, electric bills and exerting harmful effects to the environment which clearly outweighs the flawed argument of relaxation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39002932551 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91697033844 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0322060436 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15036296164 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571472816103 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529746416597 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101220430505 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383659341676 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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