You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
express your apology
why you could not meet
making arrangement to meet him.
Dear Anna
I hope you and your family are all well. How have you been? I am very sorry I won't be able to meet you next month, as we decided earlier.
let me explain in more detail, my business trip to California has been cancelled to due to some delays happening with the import of raw material from India. hence, the launch of the product, that I have worked on, is delayed to March, hence, the work load will be more and its going to be very hard to take days off. As you know this is my dream project and I want to give my best efforts to make it successful.
Though I will be available in April, after the product launch, please let me know if you will be available at that time, we can spend some time together.
I am really forward to see you.
best Regards
Manpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...next month, as we decided earlier. let me explain in more detail, my business ...
^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... the import of raw material from India. hence, the launch of the product, that I have...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
..., hence, the work load will be more and its going to be very hard to take days off....
^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
... I am really forward to see you. best Regards Manpreet
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 649.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26973684211 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10197111029 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2116019298 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1111111111 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199585003632 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976461729559 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08008914826 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145496348316 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108348458482 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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