The bar chart illustrates the data regarding the challenges that people struggled with according to age criteria when they migrate to stay in different nations.
As the chart outlines, in the host countries, the age category of 18 to 34 faced significantly to make a relationship with new friends, and this trend was replaced by finding a place to live in the middle ages, whereas more than half percentage of people struggled for learning the regional language in the aged above 55.
In detail, the hurdles which were faced by 18 to 34 aged citizens in new countries. 46% of problems of making friends per person recorded at the ages of 18 to 34, which was 6% higher than struggling to find a place to live (40%). In contrast, nearly 30% of issues represented in learning the local dialect in such age category. In terms of age 35 to 54, around two-fifths of difficulties found in distinguishing location to stay per capita, whereas 35% and 36% problems witnessed in obtaining regional language and making friends respectively.
Concerning aged over 55, more than half percent of issues faced per head in learning the local language (54%), which was more than 30% higher to the rest of the two given challenges.
- Education is recognized as vital to the future of any society in today s world Governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all children between the ages of 5 and 15 To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 93
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82775119617 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78493561775 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2980758946 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.142857143 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126331741922 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651525293738 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065845606633 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951404740395 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651647758623 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.