Tourism rarely benefits the cuountries which tourists visit.
People have different views about whether or not tourism benefits the countries which visit. While there are some good arguments that toursim affect these countries badly, I personally believe that tourism benefits them.
Theer are several reasons why tourism affect on the bad way countries where tourists visit. Firstly, tourism destroy the environment and live habitats in local. For example, lots of trees are cut down to build new hotels in some areas. Secondly, tourism would change the culture of the countries. For instance, many Russian people went to Antalya, most visited touristic place in Turkey, and decided to stay there, For this reason, Russian people changed the cultureof that place.
In spite of the above arguments, I believe that tourism benefits the countries where tourists visit. On the one hand, tourism is a perfect way to grow the economics of these countries. As an example, Greece and Morocco have grown their economics because many tourists visit there and they bring a lot of currency to these countries. One the other hand, people who live in a touristic place are able to improve their English skills by talking to tourists. For example, many students in Istanbul go to around Blur Mosque where there are lots of tourists. It is a good way for practise.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that tourism is basicly beneficial for the countries where tourists visit, although there are some bad effect for these countries.
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