It is an undeniable fact that media affects us in all aspects of our life. Whether positive or negative, these effects are greater for the younger generation. Some believe that aggression spreading through the media leads to increasing criminal acts among younger people. Although, from my point of view, criminal behavior has many roots, the media can be one of the most important that has to be considered.
To begin with, one of the most conspicuous facts is that, the young generation has a great tendency to imitate other people. Besides, the Increased use of mass media, especially among younger people, drives them to find a pattern for their life. To instance, the smart phone as a most accessible device, could easily prepare a connection to social media in which, filled by all kinds of uncontrollable contents. Furthermore, the other variety of media such as, the TV or radio, based on their owner’s insight, might be truly crime promoter.
In order to tackle this problem, one of the most pivotal aspects that need much consideration is the family responsibility for raising children till they grow up to adulthood. In the case of accessible Content by children through the media like, internet, radio or television parents should pay much more attention to age limitations. Moreover, on the basis of evidence currently available shown that, school as second home, has a pivotal role in educating teenagers about how to prevent from damages of Harmful types of media content.
By way of conclusion, therefore, based on above discussion, it seems fair to state that as a proved fact, the effect of media on increasing the juvenile crime is undeniable. Although there are several ways, as discussed above, to stay away from its negative effects.
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples from your own experience. 84
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months 11
- Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should, therefore, be dealt with by the government while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08934707904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78033419994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0491437587 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144917240191 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465029122016 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379747984933 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845196384092 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264087818324 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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