Nowadays small shops have been replaced by larger supermarkets. What are the merits and demerits.
In the contemporary era, supermarkets are very common but most of the people like to buy products from them. That is why, these shops are taking over the small ones. There are umpteen merits of this topic such as enormous amenities with certain demerits like highly expensive services. I will discuss this in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the brighter side, the prominent merit strikes to my mind is facilities. Supermarkets provide parking facility to their customers. In this way, they can easily park their car. secondly trollies are provided, customer can easily carry things which they buy from the supermarkets and customers can pay through the digital methods as well as they can get a discount and offers on products. Last but not the least, people can save their time because all the products are present under the one roof and the quality of the product and enormous variety is available in the supermarkets. As a result, because of these facilities people like to buy products from supermarket for example big bazaar.
On the darker side, the major demerits of this topic is chargeable amenities. Supermarkets always take a charge of their service like parking charges from their customer as well as when they want to take a carry bags then big shops take chargers from them. furthermore, big shop put bad impact on small shops because most of the people like to buy products from supermarkets. Owing of this, small shopkeepers are losing their business. Supermarkets are very expensive and are fixed price shops so normal people cannot afford to do shopping there.
In conclusion, no doubt there are myriad merits of shopping from supermarket because of these amenities which are provided by supermarket to its customers. People like to buy products from there but, there few demerits as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63880248427 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6336321617 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3529411765 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100631262994 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400384362318 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496985004165 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727346834547 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358031448212 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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