Teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
In this mobile world to go foreign for study was largely noticeable. Many tutor gave, guidelines to student for international education in future as it has many benefits for settlement and gaining knowledge beyond the border of mind. In my opinion this statement have more advantages rather than shortcomings. At the first place, the limitation of age is there in education by that only the teenager have perfect chance to jump out for abroad study. After completing high secondary exams they have perfect time to balance a part of international students, which gave them both materials life money and knowledge, and also have chance to became life time member of that country. The outcomes are more good as foreign countries gave proper living facility with good food and health services. Moreover, the student get chance to increase there learning skills by develop there language. For instance, the student who want to go France they should know there local tone of language. By that students overall development increased and in life balance sheet they can add more languages. In the contrast, the teenage school students are smaller in age so they have to face many more difficulties in foreign border which affect their studies. The problems like doing the job nor making the food at own, and also leave far from hometown and family members which lastly pressure the student mind and they feel like burden on their head. To sum up, overseas study are good for teens, but they have tackle some new problems over their, no one can put question mark on advantages of foreign study that drawbacks.
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Suggestion: Many tutors
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Suggestion: materials'; material's
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, as for, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95910780669 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47911077674 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7237420531 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116581944932 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441656025515 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232842857365 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116581944932 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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