that due to the physical inherent diffrences between men and women, they are not equally suited for many tasks.In my opinion I mostly agree with the suggestion and argue that men and women have evolved to serve different roles i
The prompts states that due to the physical inherent diffrences between men and women, they are not equally suited for many tasks.In my opinion I mostly agree with the suggestion and argue that men and women have evolved to serve different roles in the survival of mankind for the following two reasons.
Firstly, though men and women are the same species, they are biologically and ecologically different.They have evolved to serve different functions.For instance, men are built to hunt and gather food: capable of producing more testostrone which is an enzyme that promotes physical attributes of a human such as speed, strength,recovery and growth. This helps men in outperform there female contemporaries in most forms of physical activities which are essential hunting.On the other hand, women have physical attributes which will help them to support and nourish a baby.They produce an enzyme called estrogen in large quantities which helps them to nourish their offspring. the above examples explain why men and women are biologically different and are meant to serve different roles.
Secondly, it can be inferred on the basis of empirical data that men and women are suited for different tasks.For instance, in the case of sports.Owing to the fact that men are biologically gifted in physical attributes such as agility and strength, They have a clear cut upperhand in many physical sports like basketball and football. Further, there are very less sports which see men and women vie against each other.For instance men and women have their own leagues in most professional sporting activities and compete against the same gender.
In conclusion, some might argue that there are exceptions to the above cases. For instance, academics in which both men and women can perform a task equally well.But on looking closely, tasks like these are not contingent on the inherent physical differences.The fact that men and women have biologically evolved to serve different roles and are not equally suited for many tasks cannot be undermined.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29357798165 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86356127338 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489296636086 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.613663958 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.375 118.986275619 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.875 23.4991977007 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.125 5.21951772744 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.611691965222 0.243740707755 251% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282813892275 0.0831039109588 340% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226691354765 0.0758088955206 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.440580988608 0.150359130593 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229144592124 0.0667264976115 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 14.1392134831 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 48.8420337079 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.