Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain an important sources of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that there are a variety of people using the Internet to access the news all over the world. In my opinion, I believe that newspapers still play important roles in supplying information for human beings.
There are many reasons for this and the first reason is that newspapers are suitable for formal meetings which often limit uses of individual electronic devices. This is because there are some staff who easily lose their concentration on debating tasks through their interesting smart phones. Therefore, the productivity will decrease due to staff’s distraction on their electronic gadgets. Thus, it is reasonable that newspapers also play crucial parts in formal appointments.
The second reason is that newspapers are designed logically in various sections which help users easily access all interesting topics whereas news on the Internet only appear in small screens. For instance, drivers or riders who have to go outside all days often choose reading on newspapers in order to access topics that they are keen on. Furthermore, they also do that to keep their eyes healthy instead of looking on screens a couple of hours. Therefore, newspaper always remain vital roles in modern life.
In conclusion, although the development of the Internet makes it easy to read the news, newspapers also play important roles in many aspects of the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'staffs', 'staves'?
Suggestion: staffs; staves
...devices. This is because there are some staff who easily lose their concentration on ...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to read'.
Suggestion: to read
...ave to go outside all days often choose reading on newspapers in order to access topics...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22171945701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72644617266 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8264872697 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.909090909 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213021147811 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789287325489 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580895850219 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146853604822 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573168527164 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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