You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jay:
Hope your studying well. I am writing this letter to let you know that we would like to invite you to the birthday party for Allen next Saturday.
our class always be considered a big family, we are international students from different countries over the world. As you know, Allen joined our classroom this term, and he has suffered the homesick for two months since he left his hometown. we all have such a hard time of this struggling. next Saturday which is the 12th of June, we plan to host a birthday party for Allen, and all our classmates will attend it. The party will begin at 17:30 at the Chinese restaurant which is called the Green Jade. we already make the reservation with the restaurant, and we will do some decorations for the party. Everyone will bring a little gift for him, not need too expensive but something the let him know we care about our family members. Looking forward to you joining us next Saturday, and please do not forget the little gift.
Thanks,
Hao Jiang,
kind Regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...thday party for Allen next Saturday. our class always be considered a big family...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...y for Allen next Saturday. our class always be considered a big family, we are interna...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'since the left'?
Suggestion: since the left
...as suffered the homesick for two months since he left his hometown. we all have such a hard t...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... two months since he left his hometown. we all have such a hard time of this strug...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...ve such a hard time of this struggling. next Saturday which is the 12th of June, we ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...taurant which is called the Green Jade. we already make the reservation with the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37868795969 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7356010956 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19078635402 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663177800107 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630450458156 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183411782915 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394764539844 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.