Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
In business, there is a quote "For a momentous journey you need to have a clear mindset with a strong belief", means you need to have a lot of confidence in your idea with the support of the strong mentality and an impeccable business model. When you think about starting a business, it obviously initiates with a novel and a cohesive - brilliant idea ( followed by numerous failed ideas). Every idea starts with a problem, for example, the invention of the wheel, the Invention of the Internet. An idea that is required to fit into the business world needs to have the answers to all the hurdles or all the criticism that come in the journey of its success.
A sound idea needs to have certain goals to fit into the game of marketing. And for that, it needs to follow up a coherent - impeccable business model, which is basically a solution structure of problems, which will occur during the journey of solving them.
This structural model consists of all the solution of each and every problem and also with PLAN B for each hurdle, it has all the data required to fulfill the idea. And as for every solution, there is criticism. The Government administration has its own structure of accepting the idea into the production or activity in society.
For example, there is a popular Internet service company in India, which is well known for changing the cheap internet price history. It comes into the market around 2016 with internet charges of 1/100th of opposite internet services companies. This idea of distributing the internet at such low cost changed the algebra of Indian internet users, it massively increased in just 1 month of its span.
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 64
- The young generation should be prepared to take over the leadership of the government. 50
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems. 54
- the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a novel and a cohesive - brilliant idea followed by numerous failed ideas. Every...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82517482517 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66371500055 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520979020979 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7441841221 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482547497557 0.243740707755 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210794827945 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170580872972 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292542110507 0.150359130593 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146824706009 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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