Thorough history it is always an obvious fact that mankind would like to do what he is interested in. Some people are inclined toward about the opinion that today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do while the others are against this idea. From my own perspective, I support the first idea and in the following paragraphs will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The major reason is that when people do what they like, most of the time they feel happiness. Because of new lifestyle, nowadays men and women are so busy and usually worry about their future. One of the suitable methods to flee away from this anxiety is to what you are interested in. An experiment which has been done 3 years ago showed that people who do what they like during their life, are less suffering from depression.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that mankind unintentionally is going to do what he/she enjoys. It is an inadvertent reaction in all creatures which includes humans too. Whenever there are 2 options, probably ones will choose the activity that he likes to do. Statistics indicated that most of the activities which have been done during 2019 were unintentonally.
Although all aforementioned reasons are the first maybe one understands at first glance, but still, there is another important reason. as far as people do what they are more eager to, they do it more continuously. When you do something you like, you are able to do it without break.
To make a long story short, its reasonable that why all people are into doing what they enjoy. If one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, one soon realizes that by doing what we like, we can have more success in our life and career too.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ill, there is another important reason. as far as people do what they are more eag...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76114649682 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55727724809 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6062999166 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491555223545 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161920807059 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16323050484 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291906499346 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135003417738 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ill, there is another important reason. as far as people do what they are more eag...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76114649682 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55727724809 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6062999166 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491555223545 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161920807059 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16323050484 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291906499346 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135003417738 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.