Thorough history invention of cars has been played a significant role on mankind's life. it helps them to travel long distance so faster and more convenient. By the way nowadays some people think that In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today, in contrast, others defy this idea. I highly support the first conception and in next paragraphs will illustrate my own perspective.
The most important reason for decreasing the car's number is the saving environment. When a lot of cars are driven every day in the city, they will produce very mucch amount of CO2 and Sulfur. An experiment has been done 3 years ago and the results showed that in the cities which have a lot of cars, weather quality is very catastrophic.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that in future people will be eager to use public transports in order to decrease their costs. The cost of fuel is increasing gradually day by day, so if anybody wants to use his personal car for movement in the city, he has to pay a lot of money, by the way using public transport is a more comfortable and cheaper way to reach to destination. The government is trying to improve the quality of buses, metro and other vehicles to encourage people for using them.
Although all the aforementioned reasons are which one may consider at the first glance, there is still one major reason which has to be considered: Intenet development. The Internet has created a possible way for people to do their job even from very long distances. It means that people do not need to take time and travel for doing their tasks like paying bills or shopping.
To make a long story short, it is obvious that sooner or later the numbers of the car which we will see on the streets will decrease. If one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, one soon realizes that this reduction will be usuful for the mankind and earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, as to, in contrast, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60174418605 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48551611535 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8648522167 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252477079667 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077614902142 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698697119085 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132160939878 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570854605917 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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