Dear John,
Hope you are doing well.
I am so happy receiving your letter and the request that you are asking me to find a job in my country. Luckily, my company is hiring a marketing manager now and I think it is the one perfect for you. The job is the leader of the department, including managing the whole marketing team, which is 10 team members in total, promoting seasonal products and support sales team to achieve the targets. This is newly created job so the salary depends on the candidate experiences and qualifications, which is the good news for you.
I remembered that you tell me you have more that 5 years marketing experience and graduated from Sydney University with master of marketing so I believe it is no doubt for you to suit this job.
You could send your CV and cover letter to me and I will forward it to our HR leader directly. I will definitely put my highest recommendation on it so you won't miss the interview. I hope this is the greatest opportunity for us to reunite in here and I cannot wait to see you.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47448979592 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852557365 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9763837247 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368629559888 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141603797139 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866059559017 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225074265261 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486232525484 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47448979592 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852557365 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9763837247 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368629559888 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141603797139 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866059559017 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225074265261 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486232525484 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.