Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter:
Describe the problem
Explain why this problem has upset you
State what you want to happen as a result of your letter
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to say that I was very disappointed to experience the poor hygiene maintained by your store management and felt compromised on the health of the society members.
I am a regular customer of the store and I have noticed a bad odour of a dead rat coming from the cold storage unit. Such careless attitude could result in severe illness to the ones ordering food products online from your store. Although one cannot think of purchasing food from such an unhygienic place this also causes us the inconvenience to walk down the lane to shop for groceries. I hope you understand the severity of the matter and get the pest control done and continue to maintain the hygiene of the store to avoid such unpleasant experiences to the customers.
I trust this issue will be taken care of immediately or else I will have to raise a complaint in the consumer forum against the store.
I expect an apology to the members of the society.
Yours sincerely,
Abhishek Agrawal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he consumer forum against the store. I expect an apology to the members of the...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bers of the society. Yours sincerely, Abhishek Agrawal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78735632184 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70972592936 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6400037286 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138803040987 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560406771808 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382597822849 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617545850724 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443174479054 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.