You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Rahul,
Hope, your are doing great! I wish, even you could accompany them. Anyways, there are plethora of thing that one can do in my hometown, but considering your parents are religiuos, I have a few must do list for them. you can churn out a few of them as per their convenience.
First of all, your mom and dad are most welcome to stay at my place. but, the main attraction are far from where I stay. So, I would recommend them to stay in the Tulip international hotel, Vile Parle, mumbai which is located in the heart of the city, as well as located near to the airport and is budget friendly.
And the main things to do is, first, I strongly suggest to do mumbai darshan, a one day tour of mumbai's main attractions. Secondly, a holy visit to Siddhivinak temple, it is one of the most famously holy place in mumbai. Last but not the least, Mumba devi temple which in the heart of mumbai old market.
I would love it, if, they agree to let me take them to visit these temples. Please let me know their date of journey, so that I can plan their entire tour.
Lots of love,
Abhishek
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| 2020-02-15 | abhishek1408 | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-24 | vinshu koul | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...os, I have a few must do list for them. you can churn out a few of them as per thei...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...d are most welcome to stay at my place. but, the main attraction are far from where...
^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest doing'.
Suggestion: suggest doing
...main things to do is, first, I strongly suggest to do mumbai darshan, a one day tour of mumb...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I strongly suggest to do mumbai darshan, a one day tour of mumbais main attractio...
^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plan their entire tour. Lots of love, Abhishek
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32692307692 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3024780836 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7813379827 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21001478833 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695801981462 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566309004859 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111088304702 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706915291853 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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