Leisure is a growing industry nowadays more modern technology is used in entertainment which lead people to be less creative do you agree or disagree ? State your views with examples.
Consequent upon the hectic life people encounter today leisure industry has stamped its prominence to recharge their batteries to accomplish the optimal satisfaction. Thus leisure Industries such as tourism, adventurous sports computer games and so on have gathered its momentum since they give the desired relaxation to people. With regard to the statement whether free time activities lead people less creative is more or less a bone of contention.
Countless people nowadays are travelling across to places of importance to broaden their Horizons of knowledge and to write travelogues. For instance, tourists take a keen interest to assimilate the Heritages and get adapted to the lifestyle of people expressing a gesture of solidarity. Similarly, spots of adventurous sports are the other areas where people would like to enjoy the optimum pleasure utilising the time creatively. However, philanthropist usually spend their time to extend a helping hand to the inmates of charitable organisations showering passionate positive contributions ceaselessly to the needy spreading a message of social harmony.
The advent of new technology, nevertheless, provides the masses ample opportunities to lead and epicurean life of their choice. The influence of virtual games that has enslaved people irrespective of being young or old these days in societies is an example in this regard. This trend, apparently, drags people to a sedentary style of living inviting diseases. Besides, there are people who would like to opt their leisure time to quench to their carnal desires, moreover gambling is seen to be the craze of certain people to make use of their leisure time.
Overall, to avail oneself of the leisure time creatively or less creatively depend purely on their attitude towards life giving priority to their perceptions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to accomplish the optimal satisfaction. Thus leisure Industries such as tourism, adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, as to, for instance, such as, more or less, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48763250883 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96975392496 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8723092412 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192586252444 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068292006018 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555168465293 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116886481843 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497517544729 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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