shopping is the favorite past-time for most of the young people. what do you think is that? do you think that
they should be encouraged to do some more other useful activities?
In this modern age, when people have leisure time then they choose to do the shopping for passing the time.
Especially young people choose to do it as it keeps them updated with the latest fashion. However, some people do
shopping from e-commerce websites like Amazon, Flipkart, Myntra etcetera but the majority of people still admire in
doing shopping offline due to a lack of trust. I shall give my opinion about it as well as proffers some other
options instead of just doing shopping in my free time.
In my perception, No, people should not waste their whole extra time in shopping only instead of there are lots
of activities that one can do in extra time. In addition, it would be a mundane task if they do it repeatedly.
According to me, yes, young people should be encouraged to do some other useful activities. There are myriad
activities which can be helpful for youngsters like reading, playing, etc. The government should also take some
steps by starting some activities globally. For instance, if we look at the example of Japan then they encourage
each other by doing work even in extra time so that they become proactive as well as knowledge in one's own
field. So, people should have to get motivated themselves and convert their time to some other useful
activities.
In conclusion, it can be concluded that young people should avoid shopping in extra time and try some other
useful activities as described in the above paragraph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48313624668 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8545762797 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472856613432 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1910532851 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698210306683 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17682522459 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788664346805 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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