Some people prefer to watch live performances
from their home on TV or online, others prefer
to be present at the event and experience it
live. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently, some proportion of people are fond of watching live shows related to sports, music and singing by visiting to hosting place. By contrast, others want to relish such events with family by sitting at home. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up former view. First and foremost, some people are passionate to see their favorite celebrity very closely and take their pictures along with autographs by meeting them personally. Therefore, some masses are always curious to see live events. Besides this, some proportion of folk want to support their favorite stars by cheering hooting, shouting or clapping to boost their confidence for excellent performances. Hence, the idea of endorsement by attending live concerts deserve appreciation. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points can be mentioned to support latter view. Initially, a large number of people are dealing with busiest schedules to fullfil their towering desires. Therefore, they prefer to spend sufficient quality time with family members while watching events on television with them instead of facing crowd, traffic, noise at hosting spot. Adding to it, unlike live performances, watching events on television or online allows people to watch action replays, clear visualization, recording of events with high defination displays. Thus, a sheer percentage of people tend to take pleasure of ocassions on electronic gadgets.
From my notion, both sides have their own significance. Although attending ceremonies invites immense pleasure, privilege of modern apparatus can not be underestimated as far as enjoying events are concerned. People should make decision regarding both choices according to their interest, comforts and social requirements.
To recapitulate, different people have different attitudes. people should look for enjoyment as much as they can whether they see events by attending or on electrical appliance.
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where my essay lack to.score
where my essay lack to.score 8.0 sir ?????
Essay E-rater: 7.0 human
Essay E-rater: 7.0
human grader: 8.0
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Average score: 7.5
what is difference in scoring
what is difference in scoring of essay e rater n human grader ???
why e rater is so strict n wts the criteria to evalute ?????
could u.plz tee me??
E-rater is a computer rating
E-rater is a computer rating system to evaluate essays by above attributes.
E-rater will check essays grammatically while human graders will check them logically and the total performance.
When E-rater checked out 4 grammatical errors and 3 spelling errors, the marks will be down greatly while human graders will check whether those errors are serious or not.
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There are manifold points to shore up former view
There are manifold points to shore up the former view
Numerous points can be mentioned to support latter view
Numerous points can be mentioned to support the latter view
some proportion of folk
some proportion of folks
the idea of endorsement by attending live concerts deserve appreciation.
the idea of endorsement by attending live concerts deserves appreciation.
Sentence: Initially, a large number of people are dealing with busiest schedules to fullfil their towering desires.
Error: fullfil Suggestion: fulfill
Sentence: Adding to it, unlike live performances, watching events on television or online allows people to watch action replays, clear visualization, recording of events with high defination displays.
Error: defination Suggestion: definition
Sentence: Thus, a sheer percentage of people tend to take pleasure of ocassions on electronic gadgets.
Error: ocassions Suggestion: occasions
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1700 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.466 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.726 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.368 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.02 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5