In this era, technology paved the way to watch live concert and activities by sitting at home.few masses like to see live performance on TV or online at their own home.However others prefer to watch to be present at the place and like to expirence it.Here, I would like to account for both view with my own perception.
There are manifold point to support former view that watch live performance by sitting at home on TV or online.first and foremost, people can spent more time with their family if they watch programs on TV as compare to be present at the event.Moreover they can easily deal with their busy schedule.To justify,when people watch live performance on TV or online at their home meanwhile they can also do some important work.They grab more time for their families and they have an one advantage also that they can replay and get clear visualisation.For instance, people enjoy programme without outlay extra money and they can save easily their precious time.
On the other hand,some people prefer to be present at the place.They gain an optimum opportunity to see their celebrity clearly.They get a chance not only to shake hand but also click some pictures with them.furthermore, people can support their favourite stars by cheering and hooting . Some more advantageous of this that they also get a chance for outing with their families.Movingfurther,they see real acting and performance of their celebrities without any editing and composition and so on.
In my opinion,every person have different choices to watch programs and it is totally depends on their financial level. who watch programs on TV or online they don't only spend time with family but also save some amount of money and they have great chance to do two different work at one time.
To conclude,few masses like to watch live performance at home on TV .on other side of coin,o there take decision to be present at the place to watch activities and experience it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04419307406 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475757575758 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.996761547 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.428571429 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1428571429 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331510566064 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170146867488 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878390942081 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20911929162 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068305520007 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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