In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex school or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.
To what extent do you agree?
In today's world, parents in different regions are provided with a selection of types of schools, single-sex or double sex, to choose which is suitable for their children to send in. Some of them believe that single-sex schools drawbacks outweigh its advantages when it comes to the student's future life. I strongly support this idea.
On one side, parents who encourage their offspring to go to single-sex schools might argue that they will have more concentration on lessons rather than being distracted by their instincts needs such as having a relationship with the opposite gender. Of the top of this argument, they mention that when all person around is in the same sex, students will solely focus on what the teachers are educating and they gain the whole knowledge. Moreover, parents, on the other side, would be much less worried about their children's sex life when they have been put in same-sex schools. A father will not worry about his girl getting a close relationship with a boy which may lead to sexual activity. For some, it is a great matter of concern.
Conversely, some others side with multi-sex schools as they provide more advantages for children's upcoming life. They firmly believe that if students are separated in schools, they will not have the chance to get to know the other sex gender world and it would definitely spark to lack of mutual understanding among opposite sex genders. More than that, children who have been put in single-sex schools might find it hard to communicate with people from the other sex group. To exemplify this, a boy who has spent most of his time with other boys will find it hard to make a relationship with girls as these two sex groups have different desires and tendencies which might not be known by the boy. Overall, through experiencing living with other sex group people will gain some valuable communication knowledge which is necessary for their future life.
Despite the fact that single-sex schools have some mere benefits, I strongly side with double-sex schools, as a result, as they develop people a common understanding of the other group and might result in less sex discrimination, family troubles, and better work environment which are great parts of every adult's life. This is because, nowadays, men and women are working and living shoulder to shoulder so they must be provided with a chance to know each other beforehand. The schools, in this regard, would be their best chance.
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- In many countries today parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex school or co educational schools Some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life To what extent do you agree 73
- In many countries today parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co educational schools Some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life To what extent do you agree 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, may, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93253012048 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59975768492 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503614457831 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.072360926 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9375 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306464685446 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11803515871 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955159336835 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230755723919 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624478725077 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.