Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the most people believing that social media has more pros than cons. This is a wide spread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in individual life. However, I do not accept entirely and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the social media is not only contribute to increase the economy of the country, but also provide numerous other benefits to various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, but not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits are stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances to prosperity and excellence is concerned. For example, Facebook is a powerful social media which spread across the world.
Another pivotal aforementioned proposition is that, this can only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, only when one follow such system, it can help to broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes such as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why more are in favor of this topic. For example, Western University from Australia reveals the fact that more than 90 percentage of people got benefits from social media in terms of employment and other perks.
In the view of above outlined, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the advantages of the social media is indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
... example, Facebook is a powerful social media which spread across the world. Another...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67178520756 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3938335666 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1849862857 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062355128063 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396029270048 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113031976277 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214260367451 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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