Some people agree with spending lots of money are large wedding while others think it is a waste of time what is your opinion
Sparing a huge sum of money is considered to be justified by a segment of the society. While there are others, who consider it, to be a wastage of their wealth. I am in favour of the latter view, as I believe this money creates unnecessary burden on some people.
On the other hand, I can understand why some individuals prefer to spend huge money on marriage functions. One of the prominent reasons for the same is the significance of this special day to them. They consider that such a significant day can be made more memorable by spending a lot of on food and decorations. In addition to this, the quantum of money spent on wedding is considered as a status symbol. Therefore, great amount of money is spent on weddings just to indicate how wealthy people are. For instance, the famous cricketer, Virat Kohli and actress Anushka Sharma spent crores of rupees on their wedding just to showcase and maintain their status symbol.
On the other hand, there are adequate reasons to consider it as wastage of money. Firstly, this is promoting an unnecessary competition in the society. As a result, many poor people fall into debt trap. To illustrate, a recent study revealed that 60% marriages are being celebrated on money, which has been borrowed from the banks. Consequently, to carry momentary materialistic happiness many poor families suffer for lifetime.
To conclude, while spending large amount of money leads to happiness and symbolise status to some, I believe it a complete waste of money, which creates unnecessary burden on poor families
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90151515152 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76551471255 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5218771216 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216885881273 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684292779954 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598987500747 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135659055472 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587073038748 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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