Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the society becoming more and more advanced, people can study all kinds of knowledge in their schools. In this case, it is believed that specializing in one subject is better than studying many different subjects at one time. However, i have a contradicted idea, because i think that it is studying many different subjects that can benefit one person more.
To begin with, it is my belief that studying many different can help you to solve many different problems when you are meeting. However, to compare with the people who just learn one course, they might not have enough different type of knowledge to solve different problem. For example, one day, our family’s whole bulbs were broke at one time. Because so important the bulbs were that my mother and my father needed to change these old bulbs to several new bulbs. However, my father did know how to change the new bulbs instead of the old bulbs, thus, my mother had to change by herself. This is because when they were in the universities, my mother studied many different types of knowledge, such as, the history, the accounting, and electricity, so she understood the basic concepts of changing bulbs. On the contrary, my father just learned English when he was in the university, so he might not knew the knowledge of changing bulbs. From this example, it is obvious to see that only students learn many different subjects can they help them to solve many different types of problem in their daily life.
Additionally, hardly does a person to make a lot friends if they choose just to learn one course. This is because only when a person learn a lot of different courses can they meet a lot of different people in the schools, so they might have more opportunities to make more friends. However, the students who just learn one course will not have as more as opportunities like the students who learn a lot of courses. I still use my mother and my father as an example, when my father was in the university, because he just learn one course, so his just knows few people in the university, but my mother has a contrary situation, so many people she knows in the her university, so her friends are more than my father’s friends. It is obvious that learning many different courses can make more friends.
In conclusion, not only can people to solve many different problems in the daily life, but also they can make more friends. So i support the idea that studying many kinds of subjects are more important than studying just one course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69457013575 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53755095338 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.373303167421 0.524837075471 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7455424508 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.277777778 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137525875909 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649027330177 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679001341518 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121438136752 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650349970029 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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