Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, people are mostly aware of their health and food. Therefore, some people opine that the shops should sell more natural foods than that are imported from various places. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and explain my reasons in the following passage.
On the one hand, having naturally produced vegetables and fruits is more important to present health scenarios. At the same time, the local merchants should prefer to sell native food products. Indirectly, this will increase the country's economic level and reduce the poverty. For example, if the shops include only local foods than imported then the farmers will be more benefited as they can sell whole produced products within the nation and earn reasonable profits for their hard work.
On the other hand, individuals are getting attracted to consume imported foods mainly the young generation. Moreover, imported foods are stored for more days and are produced in huge quantity and not concentrating on the quality of the products. Accordingly, as foods are imported from far places, they are being induced with more chemicals. So that, they will be fresh for long time without getting spoiled. For example, if we consider vegetables being imported from other country, they get damage quickly, so they spray pesticides to keep them fresh. Many studies proved that disease like cancer is causing due to people consuming various fast foods.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that the shops must include local foods as it benefits many people in the nation and it also reduces the poverty. Also, increasing the sales of local produced food doubles the economic status of the country than selling the imported foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19014084507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41249351817 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8156772949 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31250118447 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112417764665 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974581702756 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213530286482 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566272910318 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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