You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter: (asked in Sep 2017 – India)
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Sir,
I am the club secretary in which you have given a small talk during your visit to here on last week. Felt very glad to Be a part of such a talk by professional like you. I am writing this to convey my regards and express how much our club members have enjoyed your speech.
On the day September 5th you have visited our club in Hyderabad, as a chief guest in the celebration of Teacher's day. The words spoken by you really mesmerised many of our club members. Indeed, they have enjoyed a lot the way you conveyed all your life experiences in a very casual way. Even though, they are very serious and important phases of your life. Accordingly, your talk is so inspirational to many members and many youngsters will take them as guidelines which will be helpful for them in their future.
It would be appreciated, if you could give another lecture for our club members in the future as per your convenience and free time.
Thank you for considering my request. I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Abc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am the club secretary in which you hav...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as per your convenience and free time. Thank you for considering my request. I ...
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Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours faithfully, Abc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56020942408 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54320954799 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0894415233 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243311640705 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895121654344 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457172509207 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148844376837 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059811608498 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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