You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter:
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Mr John,
I am writing to earnestly thank you for the talk you gave at our environmental club house, last week. It was a fantastic experience and my club members cannot stop talking about it.
You were amiable and gracious to walk us through our obligations as individuals and a society in curbing the sources and impact of pollution to protect our environment. Moreover, we had always thought that these obligations rest completely with the government and assumed that it was never our cup of tea, until last week when you gave a talk that gravitated our mindset from that. Now, we have fully become aware of the necessary actions that should be exercised at individual level to assist the government in achieving the pollution free environment that we all seek. I was literally over the moon when I observed that my club members had started to create smaller teams for the purpose of sensitizing our community at large.
It will be a cherry on the cake to have you visit us one more time and give us another lecture that span across other environmental issues like gas emissions. This can be done at your convenient time, although, I hope that I am not asking for too much. We will be more than grateful to have you grace our stage once again.
Thank you so much.
Yours sincerely,
Lilian.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73043478261 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6129530477 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1856723952 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179975430127 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751317400578 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654687363788 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142714101086 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105400161776 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.