The provided table illustrates a comparative study regarding number of people who are more than 60 years in six regions in 2000 and projected numbers in 2050. The table also shows the whole world population in both these years.
Overall, it is predicted that population of over 60 years olds will be increasing in all regions. Moreover, population will be almost doubled in all regions except Europe.
To begin with, population of 60+ age group in Asia was 12% in 2000 which is predicted to grow more than a quarter in 2050, whereas 5% of older people were accounted in Africa that was least in all regions which is expected to reach 12% in the future. Similarly latin America had 7% population of 60+ age group it will be forecast to grow 18% in 2050.
In terms of, in 2000, the population of older people was maximum in Europe in all regions and is anticipated to almost a third in 2050. However, north America and Oceania had similar population of 60+ age people that was 11% each which is projected to 26% and 22% respectively. The whole world population of more than 60 age group was 13% and is expected to grow 24% in 2050.
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- The table below gives information about population of over 600 year olds in six regions in 2000 and the predicted number of population over 60 in 2050 It also shows the world population over 60 in 2000 and 2050 Summarise the information in the followin 56
- The table below gives information about population of over 60 year olds in six regions in 2000 and the predicted number of population over 60 in 2050 It also shows the world population over 60 in 2000 and 2050 Summarise the information in the following th 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho are more than 60 years in six regions in 2000 and projected numbers in 2050. T...
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Suggestion: Similarly,
...is expected to reach 12% in the future. Similarly latin America had 7% population of 60+ ...
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Suggestion:
...lation of more than 60 age group was 13% and is expected to grow 24% in 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, third, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52682926829 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51167884821 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478048780488 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9949916106 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405156135449 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187577649135 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655916952403 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265184362979 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492890512646 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.