More people are interested in cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance Is it a positive or negative development

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...ery for having more beautiful semblance.As for me,ıt is a negative development fo...
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...aving more beautiful semblance.As for me,ıt is a negative development for people h...
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...e.As for me,ıt is a negative development for people health conditions and also un...
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...rgey has negative impact o their budget.In this essay ı will support my views wit...
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...r budget.In this essay ı will support my views with valid arguments and examles. ...
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...s with valid arguments and examles. To begin with,cosmetic surgeries are a...
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...ments and examles. To begin with,cosmetic surgeries are a medical operations.Fo...
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... To begin with,cosmetic surgeries are a medical operations.For this reaso...
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... To begin with,cosmetic surgeries are a medical operations.For this reason,the...
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...with,cosmetic surgeries are a medical operations.For this reason,they have a lot of risk...
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...ic surgeries are a medical operations.For this reason,they have a lot of risks as...
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...re a medical operations.For this reason,they have a lot of risks as other medical op...
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...ot of risks as other medical operations.So their consequences might be devastating...
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...their consequences might be devastating.Thats why people might face a lot of unwanted...
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...anted conditions after their operations.Althought these types of surgeries request high ...
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...thought these types of surgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,mo...
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...rgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,most of the doctors underestimate cosme...
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...estimate cosmetic surgeries. For example,my cousin had cosmetic surgery in 2015,sin...
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... he wanted to change his nose structure.But unfortunately durıng his operations doc...
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...y accidentally gave harm his nose cells.For this reason,after a surgey my cousın ha...
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...gave harm his nose cells.For this reason,after a surgey my cousın have lost his breath...
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...ost his breath capability from his nose.Similarly most of the people have lost their heal...
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...ost his breath capability from his nose.Similarly most of the people have lost their heal...
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...ous cosmetic surgery all over the world.Althought these types of surgeries request high ...
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...thought these types of surgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,mo...
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...rgeries request high medical knowledges,unfortunately,most of the doctors underestimate cosme...
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...s underestimate cosmetic surgeries. In addition,cosmetic surgeries dont have...
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... cosmetic surgeries. In addition,cosmetic surgeries dont have any similarities li...
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... In addition,cosmetic surgeries dont have any similarities like other indisp...
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...le medical operations in terms of budget,since health insurance companies dont support...
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...budget,since health insurance companies dont support people for their special cosmet...
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...e for their special cosmetic operations.For this reason,people subsidize their oper...
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...cial cosmetic operations.For this reason,people subsidize their operation bills as them...
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...idize their operation bills as themself.This condition give harm their personal fina...
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...dition give harm their personal finances,because they might use their precious budgets f...
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...ther essential request such as education,food.But unfortunately,cosmetic surgeries ob...
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...ssential request such as education,food.But unfortunately,cosmetic surgeries obliga...
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...such as education,food.But unfortunately,cosmetic surgeries obligate people to curb their...
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...gate people to curb their main requests.For instance,my brother eas eager to have ...
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...to curb their main requests.For instance,my brother eas eager to have cosmetic sur...
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...or instance,my brother eas eager to have cosmetic surgery for his hair.But he did...
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... to have cosmetic surgery for his hair.But he didnt have enoıght budget for having...
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...e cosmetic surgery for his hair.But he didnt have enoıght budget for having such ope...
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...noıght budget for having such operation.Thats why unfortunately,he had left his unive...
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...noıght budget for having such operation.Thats why unfortunately,he had left his unive...
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...g such operation.Thats why unfortunately,he had left his university and he used his...
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...e used his school budget for his surgery,since his health insurance didnt subsidize hi...
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... his surgery,since his health insurance didnt subsidize his operation. In concl...
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...ance didnt subsidize his operation. In conclusıon,most of the people are eag...
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...idize his operation. In conclusıon,most of the people are eager to have cosmeti...
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...ave cosmetic surgery all over the world.However,this situation might cause some of the ...
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...le social life in terms of their budgets,since people might easily leave their fundame...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21893491124 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09741844652 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.66260158 49.4020404114 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.4 106.682146367 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.2 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 56.0 5.01903807615 1116% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23968279072 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162834614188 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416573919005 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1769513157 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375156742665 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.91 50.2224549098 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.98 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.