Today TV channels focus more on men s sport than on women s sport Why has this happened Should TV channels give equal time to women s sports and men s sports

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It is true that nowadays,tv channels are more interested in men’s ...
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...nowadays,tv channels are more interested in men’s sport than women’s sport.This i...
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...sted in men’s sport than women’s sport.This is because,tv channels owners are eager...
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...sport than women’s sport.This is because,tv channels owners are eager to earn much ...
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...owners are eager to earn much more money and proportion of men’ sport is much mo...
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... to earn much more money and proportion of men’ sport is much more than the prop...
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...ore than the proportion of women’ sport.As for me,tv channels shouldnt give equal ...
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...the proportion of women’ sport.As for me,tv channels shouldnt give equal time for t...
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...n of women’ sport.As for me,tv channels shouldnt give equal time for them ,since they mi...
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...annels shouldnt give equal time for them ,since they might losee audience.In this ...
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...r them ,since they might losee audience.In this essay ı will support my ideas with...
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... with valid arguments and examples. As for the reasons,primarily,people have...
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...s and examples. As for the reasons,primarily,people have done sport since the begini...
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...port since the begining of the humanity.And most of the people have watched them w...
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...t since the begining of the humanity.And most of the people have watched them whi...
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...atched them while they are doing sports.But with the help of the technological adva...
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...evisions or any other their technoloical devices.But tv channels dont seperate eq...
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...r any other their technoloical devices.But tv channels dont seperate equal time fo...
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...r technoloical devices.But tv channels dont seperate equal time for the women’ spor...
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...men’ sport as they do for the men’ sport,because most of the tv channels work for the th...
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...ecause most of the tv channels work for the their private companies.So these company owne...
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...ls work for the their private companies.So these company owners are willing to mak...
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...re profit from their channel’s contents.Mens sport contents bring them much more bud...
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...h more budget than women sports contents,because,Unfortunately,people are more intereste...
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...en sports contents,because,Unfortunately,people are more interested in men’s sport than...
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...erested in men’s sport than women sport.For this reasons they tend to see mens spor...
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...ted in men’s sport than women sport.For this reasons they tend to see mens sport on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, as for, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37823834197 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76535310031 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 96.0 20.2975951904 473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.0 49.4020404114 413% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 519.0 106.682146367 486% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 96.5 20.7667163134 465% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552555438035 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.50159099128 0.084324248473 595% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560061525114 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.50159099128 0.151304729494 332% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560061525114 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.2 13.0946893788 399% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.5 50.2224549098 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.4 10.1190380762 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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