Performing in front of a large gathering is not everybody's piece of cake. It is many peoples' perception that this skill is ought to be taught in schools. This essay puts a spotlight on the prominence of this skill, by mostly agreeing to the given statement.
Firstly, let's discuss the necessity to learn to address a huge crowd. Obviously, it pumps anyone high on confidence. Although it is not a cakewalk, once mastered helps individuals in standing out anywhere. Moreover, it helps us in creating an identity in any field in which we opt for a career. For instance, let's consider any office-oriented job where presentations are required every now and then. The ones who are good speakers gain a reputation easily. So, it's always essential to be a good speaker.
Jumping into the extent of agreement of the statement, I mostly stand with it. The responsibility of teaching this talent highly lies on the shoulders of educational institutions. If they fail in accomplishing this, then who will? This skill can only be tacked if one has been working upon it since schooling. As we cannot find any other better place to learn such things schools should help out children in being good presenters.
Thus the prominence of speaking out and responsibilities of schools has been briefly discussed. This essay is concluded in the agreement of the given statement as all the necessary information is submitted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s been working upon it since schooling. As we cannot find any other better place t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99152542373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0273577828 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0879024021 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2941176471 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260982886242 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699887949829 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750451656318 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157394075039 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997859603228 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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