Describe someone in your family who you really admire.
I have got a nuclear family that has only three members. All of us cherish each other very much, and we share a strong bond and affection. It's quite hard to pick someone among them I admire the most. Well, if I have to choose someone, it would be my mother. I want to thank you for this important topic and for the time you have allowed me to talk about the person in my family, I admire deeply. I revere my mother, love her from the deepest core of my heart for her adorable behaviour. She is the person I can share everything with, and that's the reason I worship her so much. She is perky, charismatic, optimistic, and the ray of sunshine in my life. Possibly she is the first person I saw when I opened my eyes to this world. Someone's relationship with his or her mother is divine. I can still remember a childhood day when I was late to return home due to a project at the school I did not know. After two hours or so, I noticed my mother at my school. I was frightened that my mother would be angry with me, and she would punish me. But, when my mother saw me, she had a warm smile on her face and then hugged me passionately. At that very moment, I realised how much she loves me and cares for my safety and wellbeing. To describe her more, I would say she is kind to all in a unique way and yet proactive and in control. She loves cooking, decorating homes with innovative ideas, helping others and reading news. The reason I admire her, well - she is caring, compassionate, and possesses kindness and love for everyone. She is an ideal mother who raised two children and ensured their quality education and moral values. She has sacrificed a lot and had never complained about anything to us. She is the person who reminds me of the power of love and affection. How could not I admire her unconditionally?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...person I can share everything with, and thats the reason I worship her so much. She i...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a unique way" with adverb for "unique"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...er more, I would say she is kind to all in a unique way and yet proactive and in control. She l...
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Line 1, column 1702, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... never complained about anything to us. She is the person who reminds me of the pow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 24.0651302605 299% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25507246377 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48556929687 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553623188406 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.327576249 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7272727273 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6818181818 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68181818182 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097089504897 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325018963802 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432366503683 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097089504897 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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