It is the fact that a lot of Vietnamese students go abroad to study every year. However, studying in a foreign country has both advantages and disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the globalization process and economic development, many people opt to go overseas to get higher education. Studying in a foreign country has its own positive and negative sides, but I believe that it has more benefits for the students themselves. By studying abroad, students have a realistic opportunity to learn at prestigious universities in developed countries. By doing this, students can attend at the best universities and expose to lecturers who are experts in fields. Moreover, international qualifications which achieve from these schools can help them to open doors in their career. As a result, students can foresee their future with high paying jobs and satisfying positions. Last but not least, oversea students can live in places with different cultures and customs. Thanks to this, they can gain experience in a foreign country and seem to be open-minded and ready their later lives. On the other hand, students probably face some difficulties when they study abroad. First and foremost, living away from home can be challenging to oversea first-year students, especially to who never leave their parents for a long time. Thus, many students feel homesick and miss their families after school time. Besides, the language barrier also leads the big problems as they learn to adapt to a new environment. This makes many students nervous to understand latest people and even suffer from culture shock. Moreover, students will also have to find suitable accommodations and pay bills without being supported by their parents. In conclusion, studying abroad brings excellent chances as well as the enormous challenges in a new country. However, it is acceptable when students achieve the best education in overseas after they overcome those problematic things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 457, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...st universities and expose to lecturers who are experts in fields. Moreover, internatio...
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Line 1, column 1361, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'understand the latest'.
Suggestion: understand the latest
...nt. This makes many students nervous to understand latest people and even suffer from culture sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34642857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85444292074 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1848532376 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187612807731 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635218388042 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450434973212 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187612807731 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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