Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?
Juvenile these days are believed to spend a great deal of time on glueing their eyes on television. This worrisome tendency originated from several causes but luckily there is some action to be taken to eliminate this hassle
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations about the excessive watching television of children nowadays. First and foremost, television is reportedly an addicted source of entertainment. There seem to be shreds of evidence that it is far more attractive to children when compared with other recreational activities including reading, working out or playing sports. An illustration of this is that numerous youngsters are quickly losing their temper whenever they are being disrupted during watching favourite tv programmes. Another reason for this phenomenon is due to the diminishing of the playground. It is irrefutable that in various urban areas, especially in the industrializing ones, the playing fields are being cut down in replacement of skyscrapers and other business institutions. Consequently, it synonymous with narrowing the opportunity to have outdoor recreation of modern children.Therefore, television apparently make a ideal choose as a substitution
Some solution should be under consideration in order to tackle this problems. In the first place, there should be a appropriated schedule for using the television. Installing specialized softwares related to managed screen time can be a good means of organizing the television usage. Even if the television is not compatible with the cutting-edge applications, using a traditional notification such as sticky notes can also be a good case in point. The second answer is that parents should spent more time with their children through family day trips or picnics at the weekend. It help stimulating the child to step outdoor and keeping them away from the small screen. Furthermore, parents should encourage their children to hang out with their friends more frequently to establish their communication and social skills.
To summarize, the excessive usage of television caused by the lack of playground and the alluring of the television itself and parents should establish a prosper television-using time, organizing day trips or encourage them to hang out with friends to keep them away from the electrical screen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, such as, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2300516995 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567039106145 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1154871491 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.266666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149951277214 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052221755527 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466620117877 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849725415827 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546303555101 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.