The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The plans illustrate various changes in the structure of a university's sports center after being renovated.
Overall, in the future, the sports center will become more convenient for those who love physicial activities. There is an introduction of some new categories such as dance studios, a leisure pool, a sports hall, a cafe, and a sports shop for example.
The striking change can be recognized immediately is that two seperated outdoor courts on both sides will be joint together with the center part. They will be removed to make room for a leisure pool on the left and a sports hall as well as two dance studios on the right of the 25m pool.
The pool in the heart of the sports center remains unchanged with a changing room and seating surrounding, but the gym is going to be expanded to the east of the center. The service will be optimized with more changing rooms in the southwestern and southeatern corners of the map. Moreover, the members can easily find the sports shop and cafe on two sides once they enter the sports center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ate various changes in the structure of a universitys sports center after being r...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...uch as dance studios, a leisure pool, a sports hall, a cafe, and a sports shop for exa...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...om for a leisure pool on the left and a sports hall as well as two dance studios on th...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...reover, the members can easily find the sports shop and cafe on two sides once they en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834739036 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 9.0 0.824742268041 1091% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.4709105536 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208407630154 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107304461979 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662833186325 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156011568063 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671813180511 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.