It is undeniably fact that increasing population leading to shortage of space to make house so high-rise apartments are being made. However, few believe staying in skyscrapers make people unhappy and loner while other consider stay in apartments is adavantageous. Both views will be discuss in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to any opinion.
To start with the former view, it is scientifically proven that living in high rise flat makes people sad and lonely. This is because usually neighbors do not meet with each other due to hectic schedules. Furthermore, apartments have similar designs and sometimes an individual
cannot bring change in it due restrictions. For example, mostly rented apartments do not get permit for the renovation.
Moving to other side, in the era of inflation it is little tough for the the masses to make own house so they prefer rented apartments and these are mostly situated in centre of city with proper facilities. Hence, it proves beneficial as they do not need to go far to get daily things. Moreover, it provides good standard of living where one can get shelter and facilities in a budget.For an instance, metropolitan cities have societies where apartments have been made, inside the society people get all facilities including grocery market, gym, swimming pool, parks.
In a conclusion, high rise apartments are good to live rest it depends on the individual's budget,choice, mind. It has more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23949579832 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94522230734 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9638671593 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302522453304 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103121147004 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780351113967 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166940255485 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990597561061 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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