Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.
Give your opinion and support it with relevant examples.
In the 21st century, the number of young people who get diseases as a result of a sedentary lifestyle has increased significantly. While some people are convinced that government have to integrate sport in the life of all students, other doubt the effectiveness of this measure. I completely believe that sport is a good habit that should be instilled in everyone from a very young age due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
Firstly, the habit of playing sports strengthens a person's discipline and displaces harmful addictions. Playing sports requires regularity, maintaining or increasing the load and is completely incompatible with the use of alcohol and drugs. For example, most young people try banned substances in bad companies where people don't train. Sports youth have no time to think about bad habits due to their incompatibility with classes and lack of free time. To sum up, instilling sports from childhood is an investment in the nation's health and intelligence.
Although, some people deny the fact that sport should be an integral part of every person's life, I doubt this opinion. If we are talking about amateur sports, then its integration into the daily routine will only benefit. For instance, numerous diets allow you to lose weight to a certain level, sports help to continue losing weight, modeling body and strengthen the muscles. Summarizing all of the above, in combination with proper nutrition sport is essential for improving the lives of citizens and their moral and physical condition.
Moreover, amateur sports can develop into a successful professional career and bring international recognition. In the world, it is not uncommon for a person to engage in sports for themselves, choose their favorite direction and achieve unprecedented results in it. For example, the great Soviet track and field athlete Vladimir Kuts became interested in sports in the army, where he did not have a mentor. After being noticed by a distinguished coach, he set many world records in the 5000 and 10,000 m running, and in 1956 became an Olympic champion. Thus, amateur sports help to reveal talents and radically change a person's life.
Due to the reasons mentioned before, I am absolutely sure that sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. This measure will not only support the quality of citizens life in the future and also will help them discover new opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, talking about, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18112244898 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91875867042 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599489795918 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.473376061 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.894736842 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309114925987 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867561848248 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715466404343 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17310759143 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550856503921 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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