Nowadays, an increasing number of people buy what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies of shopping online?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the years mankind has recognized the need for daily supplies as groceries, household needs, clothes and other stuff. Nowadays process of buying goods became easier through Internet where people might order almost everything online. This essay will discuss the pros and cons for phenomenon of online shopping supported by relevant examples.
Two main advantages of this phenomenon are buyer’s convenience and endless choice of items in Internet. Ordering anything online allows customer to save a lot of time which they waste in traffic jam on the way to the shop. For example, when I furnished my apartment, a lot of furniture arrived to me from Ikea web site. Moreover, if person is looking for something special which is not available in regular stores, Internet is good solution. For instance, Red Autumn, one of my favorite Russian Youtube bloggers, often orders rare cosmetic from the USA through delivery services. Hence, the comfort and multiplied options of goods provided by online shopping should be taken into account.
As for the disadvantages, difficulty of buying without physical presence and risk of overspending should be mentioned. Unfortunately, some kinds of stuff are hard to choose without trying or touching, like jeans or bed linen. For instance, my friend ordered variety of swimsuits for her sea holiday, and she was upset due to the reason none of them fit her well. Another problem is illusion of endless cash in your bank account buying things remotely. For example, according to statistics big percent of Russian population borrowing debt money from banks to cover impulse purchases. Thus, anyone who prefer to shopping spree must be aware of complexity of distance choosing and danger of money waste.
To conclude, am convinced that online shopping is phenomenon which consists of positive and negative sides. Whereas the former provide convenient environment and rank of good’s choices for buyer, the latter might incline the person to spend more than expected and create obstacles to choose right item.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29357798165 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6407927492 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681957186544 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9651458492 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220618762408 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631809674284 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327288431953 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126556977813 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340752971149 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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