Nowadays, there are lots of gyms and sport facilities in cities, but sedentary lifestyle is increased more. Firstly, the main problems will be discussed then some possible solutions will be mentioned.
It is proven that obesity and backache come from sedentary lifestyle. Unfortunately, obesity is an epidemic disease and the main cause is sedentary lifestyle, and when you burn low calories, you will be save fat in your body. For instance, we work in a company that its field is computer programming, so we have to sit in front of our computers from morning to noon, and most of my colleagues are fat. In addition, when you stay in a position for a long time, some of your muscles goes weak, so you feel pain in parts of your body especially your back and neck. Again, you can find someone around yourself who tolerates this pain because of sitting for a long time during a day. Overall, obesity and backache are serious problems for population these days.
Now, one of the best ways to reduce the impact of sedentary lifestyle is promoting sports and activities. People can commute by bicycle or walk instead of driving their own can, so the result of this action is more activity. If the government advertises these simple ideas, it can decrease the number of people who have gotten sick because of this type of lifestyle. Moreover, by increasing sport facilities and sport clubs in the city, people can use these easier and cheaper than before. For example, in my city there are wide range of clubs and people enjoy there and keep fit at the same time. Advertisement in this field will have positive effects on this problem certainly.
In conclusion, there are several problems that are appeared by sedentary lifestyle, but the government can reduce the negative impacts such as obesity and backache by promoting on TV and social networks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83596214511 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60589209409 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8731157711 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172830419036 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600944177699 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339334021556 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104445756665 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190765822707 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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