The main priority of government’s investment must be focus on public services instead of arts, music, and theatre. I am sure that it is not true and arts are a part of society that the government has to pay attention to these.
It goes without saying that culture is one of the most important sections of a country. Arts, music, and theatre are making our culture stronger than before. There were a lot of good attitude in my motherland that were destroyed during last decades, so the government can save these by investing money in arts. For instance, they can put very good advertisement during a show and illustrate people how to use a traditional manner. This fact is proven that arts have an essential role in society and it can help the government to keep people happy with a normal behaviour.
In addition, funding in arts makes job and money for people too. As you know, there are wide ranges of jobs related to arts and billions of dollars are transferred during a year, so these are helpful for economy too. The government makes people happier by investing on entertainment, and it makes money from this funding at the same time. I have an uncle who works for a big instrument company, and he improves his profession because he is supported by culture and art ministry. He said, “They believed that work on arts, music, and theatre makes jobs for people and makes money for them.”
In conclude, I am certain that finding money in arts is not a wrong way. It helps people to know their culture better; moreover, it makes a lot of jobs for amateurs and professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, as to, for instance, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64056939502 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6371667557 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2718762843 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263020359924 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984341237111 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813924988986 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169949984163 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928311221763 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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