In recent years many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive development or negative development?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that preference to visit huge departmental stores has been mushroomed from last few decades which directly influenced the domastic business. In my opinion, it confers a variety of positive consequences. This essay would discuss both sides of this phenomenon in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are plethora of advantages of growing large shopping centers. One of the most preponderant one is that it is a time saving because customers have no need to go at different shops to buy products, as all products are available under one roof. It cannot only contribute to preserve their precious time, but also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. To exemplify, people can shop and enjoy their time with their families and friends because of various food outlets which are situated in malls. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, masses can enhance the quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience by buying upgraded products that might not available on small shops. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead as far as agumenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, buying products from multiplex also offers a wide range of facilities namely; by one get one, discount, credit points which help consumers to save money. Also, people have various options to pay Billing. Thay can pay through PayPal, credit card, debit card and from Google account which make their shopping more lenient, however, local shops are not facilitated with these advanced services. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicate that more than 60% people liked to purchase their products form large shops rather than from small vendor. Admittedly, it is positive development.
On the flip side, it has a chain of ramifications that may threat local shopkeepers because running shops is the only one way to fulfill their daily needs because it is the greatest source of their income. Apart from it, it also puts pressure on economy because only local good are sold in small stores, but in large shopping stores, international brands are sold. By doing so, a large proportion of profit goes to another country that is not good for that nation. Hence, it is clear that it is also responsible for delivering some negative consequences.
To conclude, having ponderd over above stated, it is crystal clear that benefits of purchasing things from large malls are indeed too great to ignore the negative aspects of shutdown local shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09935205184 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64651905103 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568034557235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5348422 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263731741 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718090306572 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059478788869 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136189458781 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059773209035 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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