superheros on our comunity
Superheroes are a gift from God to help people, they make our life safe and we can live a peaceful life on our planet. Some stories happened in my city that are very interesting for people to know.
First, there was a stealer, he goes inside all the houses and takes other people's stuff there walet, gold, diamonds, and money. Suddenly the hero was walking around the neighborhood. He saw the stealer that stole everyone’s stuff, the secret hero started running after him until he caught him. Then he took him to the police station and they put him in jail.
Second, one day there was a magic show in the city, the guy who was doing a magic show made a mistake on his play that was going to end up with a huge bum that would explode at any moment. Meanwhile, the Magic hero was watching the play and he felt that there was a problem with the guy. He had a little experience about magic and he knew that it would hurt all the people. He jumped to the guy and took the hat and throughed it to the river.
Third, the hero planned to go fishing. He got everything ready then he went on the boat, crossed the river to the middle of the ocean, he started fishing, after an hour and half he saw a shark, so he said what would I do? I'm a hero! so I have to do something good. He kept on thinking and said u know what? I would jump before the shark eats all the fishes. they needed to stay alive. He jumped and fought the shark, he killed it and put it on the boat. After that he brought it to the Fish Market.
Without heros, A Lot of trouble would have happened and our life would be difficult. Heros are our life savior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to know. First, there was a stealer, he goes inside all the houses and takes ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...aw a shark, so he said what would I do? Im a hero! so I have to do something good....
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Line 8, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... so he said what would I do? Im a hero! so I have to do something good. He kept on...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...p before the shark eats all the fishes. they needed to stay alive. He jumped and fou...
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Line 8, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k, he killed it and put it on the boat. After that he brought it to the Fish Market. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16772151899 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10451127664 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3785191473 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.85 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066422178012 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250015328124 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643876452749 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679846313333 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850021751553 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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