Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
television is one of the basic devices that is most important in every house all around the globe. In my opinion, people communications became much lower than it was before the advent of the television. I feel this way for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
first of all, television has a lot of programs and movies that based on attraction of people. during setting at home every one in the house is looking for the clock till their favourite movie shows up. during movie every one in the house are focusing in the events that's happening in the story. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have four kids all of them are so active, they did not allow me to study for my toefl, I decided to buy for them 75 inch tv and I subscribed on Netflix. After they started to follow kids movies they started to become addicted to that movie story and they start to watch that movie everyday. As a result, the house became quite and I was able to study. on the other hand, in the past it was so difficult to let the kids stay quite because the love to talk to each other. Had not I bought a tv for my family, they would not let me prepare for the toefl exam.
seconedly, news channel in the tv are very important for everyone to watch. every one want to watxh what is happening in the world by watching news in the tv, there are so many channels and each one has his or her favourite one, in the past, however, there was nothing that and no one has the knowledge of what is going on around them. As a result, people in the past they get to talk and communicate with each other more frequently. For example, when we are sitting at home with my friends every one was looking for his favourite channel either in the tv or in the computer to watch the news. If there were not such devices at home, we would talk and communicate with each other and we would spent a nice day.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, tv has a negative impact on people communication, not only because they designed to attract people to watch the movies but also people are very interested in watching news and what is going on around the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29197080292 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33017883985 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459854014599 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0789836911 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150266113806 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054386421279 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652622269722 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101155484849 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308097854574 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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