Some people believe the government should construct more railway tracks while others think they should improve existing vehicles .
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Around the world , some people think government should build inter city railway tracks while others believe present public vehicles should be improved. In my opinion , the running public transports should be enhanced as some of them are too old and to decrease traffic jam those vehicles are necessary.
The transport mediums which are controlled by the states are sometimes too aged. Even though those cars are still in service , they are not strong enough.As a result , accidents occur every now and then. However , as coaches are very ancient , working persons often become late to their offices for the slow rate of speed. For instance , Bangladesh government still using Bedford buses which was brought to service in early 19th century. Moreover, they have become burden for the government and it is obvious for the reign to replace them.
Again , couple of families are using more than one car. For every individual family member of a family , there is an individual car .These causing a great standstill situation all over when all the family persons get on the road at the same time . So , to discourage the use of private cars govern body might take some steps like bringing attractive public transportation which can only possible if the old vehicles are thrown away. For example , In our country some government buses are introduced from north part of the Dhaka city to south part. After the introduction of the bus,many commuters are using it because it is so luxurious like those are air conditioned and seats are comfortable.
On the other hand , if railway paths are organised then it will take less time to reach from one place to another. In addition , the users of train have to spend less than the bus passenger as the ticket price are too low.
In conclusion , though some people argue for the construction of more rail lines and it has some advantages but in my opinion to get better service and to decrease traffic jam it is obvious that the government should concentrate on recent public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92082111437 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53120282753 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5350630821 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235267333897 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720141639168 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107263448878 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14193592587 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126465901716 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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