In our lives, there are many times that we have to decide on something important. Some people ask someone, and other people make a decision by himself. I strongly believe that a person should never make an important decision alone, because one can learn how to decide appropriately by asking. In addition, one can remove the burden by sharing the worry. Lastly some people are minors to decide by themselves.
To start with, one can learn how to decide appropriately by telling the problems. Some people cannot decide a good way along with the situation.The reason for this is that they are immature to make their own decision. I will give you one example. There are times that this circumstance comes to me: deciding on my own. However, before I resolve, I go to my parents and ask what to do. Then, they give me the right way to make a good choice. It is better than my own verdict, because I cannot decide appropriately.
Next, one can remove the burden by sharing the worry. When people have a distress, they want to talk to someone who they depend on. After they tell, their sensation gets better. This is the same point when people have to conclude something. In my situation, I always talk with my parents when I worry, and have to decide on something. When I talk with them, my feeling becomes better, like a feeling of relief.
Last, some people are still minors to decide by themselves. They are almost emotional. They make their decision impulsively: make verdict along their sentiments. So someone should lead them to choose proper way. One good example is my teacher who always helps us students to make a decision. Because of her help, we are all free from any troubles.
Overall, a person should never make decision by himself, because some of them are still minors, and people can delete their burden by asking someone to give their advice. Moreover, they can learn how to make an admirable decision by asking someone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, moreover, so, still, then, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71554252199 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48998993556 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463343108504 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5711134916 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8461538462 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1153846154 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168129031346 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457109765144 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633454767451 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111616697394 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060126649399 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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