The earnings of celebrities and the people who do politics are disputable. Some people believe it is okay that the celebrities earn more while others do not.This easy will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of the income of both type of people.
The persons who had taken acting , playing or dancing as profession earn a lot nowadays. The footballers or cricketers who earn more than anyone in the society are encouraged because more money means better performance. If they perform well,the youngsters are inspired by watching them and they also want to take those sports as their earning source.However,it is so much benificial for himself and the country as well.For instance , Sakib Al Hasan , the greatest all-round cricketer in the world attained more money than all other cricketers in Bangladesh. Many young people wanted to be like him as he is recognised by the world and earn a lot of money.Secondly,the humans who are earning their bread by acting can be a representative of their culture.Because the movies and dramas are not only a source of entertainment but also a medium to spread regional culture.Such as , in Indian Pemire League , one of the biggest cricket event in India , introduce bollywood actor and actress who is in the leisure times teaching the international cricketers about Indian songs,dress or even dance.
On the other hand, poiltics can't bring too much money these days rather some politicians are strrugling to support their family. Moreover , for this reason they also can't serve their society as well. As a result , the people are not getting their rights properly.So,robbery,theft,murders are increasing in the community.Again,if the salary of a politicians are less the began to rely on corruption.Though they get a sacred opportunity to serve their country,they do not maintain the responsibility towards the nation instead they use the state tresury for their personal use. For example , in the third world countries like Bangladesh,Sri Lanka,India the wages of politicians are not so high.So,in this region the crimes are rising.
In conclusion,celebrities are earning considerably more in modern days rather than politicians which have diverse effect in the socity.So,equality should be matter of concern in that case otherwise everbody will face the concequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33879781421 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63429198362 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.651377232 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.636363636 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2727272727 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239330345066 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101543932597 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481155851813 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139439151048 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136773171039 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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