You are getting married soon Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him her to the wedding In your letter Describe your future wife husband What will happen at the wedding Why do you want to invite him her

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit.

I'm having a good news to share with you, next month on 23 Oct I'm getting married. So, I will be fortunate to see your presence here in India.

Actually, one of family friend introduced Neha in a social event to my mother. She is very charming and also a registered nurse with Saint Paul Health Department. Moreover, her dream is same as mine to settle abroad. All these things made my Mom to persuade both the families for pairing us.

For wedding there are many things in my mind. Firstly, the venue as I had booked is one of the newly build hall "The Royals" that was designed on French theme. Apart from it, Chef Sanjeev will be there to handle all the roasted items. And the main attraction will be singing performance by eminent Punjabi singer, Ranjit Bawa.

As you are fashion designer, hence my costume plannings are pending. Thus, I believe you will join this special moment atleast 2 weeks before. Also, bring uncle and aunt as it's a long time since we last saw them.

Super excited to see you.

Yours faithfully,
Roman Ted.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ou in the best of health and spirit. Im having a good news to share with you, n...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...best of health and spirit. Im having a good news to share with you, next month on 23 Oct...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...to share with you, next month on 23 Oct Im getting married. So, I will be fortunat...
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Line 11, column 174, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s before. Also, bring uncle and aunt as its a long time since we last saw them. ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, hence, moreover, so, thus, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62561576355 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30297542206 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738916256158 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9006004288 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6875 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16550525673 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486476128838 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375112293064 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746758553505 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285272720125 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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