Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve
the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that education quality plays an increasingly important role in all of the societies in the world. I entirely agree with the view that the government must increase teachers' salaries. I feel this way strongly for two main reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay with two academic facts.
First, when the government raises the teachers' wage, teachers performance sharply improve. In this way, there are Several academic papers proved the relationship between teachers' performance and their salary. Also, these studies show that pay can eventually lead to more efficiency in teachers' live. On the other hand, the result of these studied demonstrated that low-income eventually causes a significant decrease in quality teaching services at school.
Second, the salary is a significant factor in the teachers' motivation at work. A few days ago, I saw a news form the BBC live stream, which in that reporter had an interview with Dr. David Jonson, professor and head of a research group at Harvard University, who attempted to investigate the correlation between teacher,s income and their motivation in several countries in the world. They have surveyed more than 1000 teachers in around ten countries. The result of this work shows approximately in more than 90 percent of cases that there was a significantly positive relationship between teachers' salary and their motivation.
To sum up, based on the arguments explored above. I believe that most of the time, an increase in teachers' salaries can lead to an improvement in their performance and motivation at work. Nonetheless, I agree that the government in the world must try to enhance teachers' income every year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, i feel, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91136274927 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0033455088 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240914466543 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080903829301 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484631660355 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148286359123 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531598765239 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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